http://alphien.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] alphien.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] eiremauve 2011-06-13 10:13 pm (UTC)

I really enjoyed your use of enjambment, and the narrator's tone was very strong. Excellent!

Good luck in the polls!
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